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Scott Spires's avatar

How important is the one, unbroken sentence to the story as a whole? Would it work just as well with normal sentences? I'm aware of other books that do this, like Bohumil Hrabal's "Dancing Lessons for the Advanced in Age" and Lucy Ellmann's "Ducks, Newburyport." And no, I haven't read them, because the idea sounds gimmicky to me, and once you start writing your book this way, you're committed - you're stuck on that high wire to the end. ("Ducks" BTW uses the phrase "the fact that" more than 19,000 times to keep the sentence going over 1000 pages.)

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James Elkins's avatar

Your note about Substack Notes, as opposed to Posts, brought be to your essay. I don't dsagree about what you say about Fosse's spirituality, but I don't think it makes for great fiction; you may want to look at an opposing viewpoint. https://open.substack.com/pub/jameselkins/p/why-jon-fosse-is-not-a-major-writer

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